A beautiful senryu wisely executed in three lines having nice theme. Thanks for sharing.10
A fabulous Senryu! The changing effect of 'Her fair face' is magnificently coordinated with 'his stealing glance'....action vs reaction.....I like the gravity of poetic imagination! Thanks dear madam for sharing!
One of the best poems by Valsa George, these three amazing lines seem a concentrated essence of entire Urdu and Persian Ghazals.
At his stealing glance! Like one seen in the bush. Nice piece of work.
A simple observation of life turned into a Senryu.. Beautiful one Valsa ma'am..
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A wonderful little poem dear madam! Thanks for sharing! (Poetess Magadha)