Senryu - Birthday Gift Comments

Ha ha very interesting piece of poem.

wonderful; it's also thoughtful//// Whatever s/he loves S/he brings it; In the style of love The bees will bring honey যাহা সে ভালোবাসে সে তাহা আনে; প্রেম রীতিতে মৌমাছি মধুই আনিবে

Wise and witty with a touch of humor.

Simply superb Craft poem and wonderful thinking.

Nicely thought. What cat liked for self offered you very innocent.

This birthday gift poem seems to be very humorous and amazing. You are clever enough to pen this amazing poem...10

This is mind blowing.

बहुत बढ़िया उपहार मेरा कुता भी लाया मेरे लिये एक उपहार एक रबर की बनी हड्डी जिसने पहनी थी आधी चड्डी बेहतरीन कविता 10++