Thursday, December 20, 2018

Senryu - Awaiting Slumber Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2018

Memories of the night. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2018

my head on pillow Icicles hung from the roof awaiting slumber.....so touching and haunting. Beautiful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 20 December 2018

Such a beautiful senryu! Great work!

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S H 20 December 2018

Imagery is good, the melting of ice and coming of sleep nicely expressed, so is the life.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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