Tuesday, November 23, 2021

Senryu ~ Ashes Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

when empty darkness
surrounds a hollow timeline
nameless ashes fly
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 November 2021

Thank you dear Asim ji for the awesome poems that you pen.......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 November 2021

Ghosts of memories enter a dark, empty, void mind.....Brilliant depiction of mind through this Senryu

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Ricky Mangathen 25 November 2021

Very well said. Loved it

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David Wood 24 November 2021

Very profound Asim!

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Maria Mitea 23 November 2021

Fabulous work, Asim!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

A wonderful senryu. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

In the realm of emptiness, memories are like ghosts. A poem of great depth.

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 November 2021

Sigh! No escape from the memories. Awesome thought.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 November 2021

to-o-o wonderful to comment Bravo!

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