Senryu: Apples Comments

Senryu to ponder upon. TOP Marks, David.

The apple you had in thought to eat and it had been robbed away by unknown beings, your life stops when the one apple you had in mind was picked away. Greatest disappointment follows. Brilliant Senryu, David!

Sheer brilliance! I can absolutely relate. What a masterpiece! Full marks!

Fantastic. The subtle humour in the poem, the poet directs at himself. Beautiful.5*

Like Blue bull this poem is wonderful. Short and straight.5 Str.

Like honey bees. At service - always. Amusing poem. All Stars

Awesome Senryu. Good that the tree is still there. I want this tree to remain no matter apples are there or not.5*****

Mine Too David Bravo! ! ! ! !

This is simply excellent.....thank u, dear friend.....

This is a perfect poem. I thought it is a haiku, now I need to look up senryu. Thanks for the lesson

Brilliant David : ) Loved it x

Wow! ! This is super senryu. Thanks.