Thursday, February 9, 2023

Senryu ~ A Walk Comments

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along the seashore,
waves are rushing on to smash
like thoughts in my head
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M. Asim Nehal
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 11 February 2023

nice imagery is seized in poetic words

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 February 2023

Brilliant especially the last two lines

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 10 February 2023

A marvel! "Waves… like thoughts in my head". Just great, brilliant

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Richard Wlodarski 10 February 2023

A brilliant double senryu, Dr. Nehal! Love it!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 February 2023

Lines carrying the depth of ocean! Kudos!

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Ricky Mangathen 09 February 2023

Great metaphor used, waves and ripple in water. I admire your imagination.

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