Senryu ~ A Union Comments

Tghis Senryu enthralls me,5 Stars fullest on TOP, Mr.ASim Sir!

Wonderfully put and presented,5 Stars full on TOP! I have enjoyed very much!

Sagar mein ghagar. Shabdon ka jaadu.........

True union will entrall.

Very true: union of body and soul an eternal bliss.

Goes to my favourite. Full stars. A satisfaction.

A wonderful Senryu - Full stars

True, Complete satisfaction and eternal bliss when we have perfect union of mind body and soul with self and the with beloved.*****