Wednesday, March 31, 2021

Senryu ~ A Perfect Lethal Plot. Comments

Rating: 5.0

cold rain soaked my skin
her sharp eyes like whetted knives
perfect lethal plot.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2021

Perfection and absorption both are in perfect lethal plot. An amazing poem is well crafted.

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Rashmi J 01 April 2021

killer haiku.

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Zuzu Mutairi 31 March 2021

X c llent poem.

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Michael Jack 31 March 2021

Cool poem. short and terse.

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Michael Jack 31 March 2021

Good one Asim.

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S H 31 March 2021

Yes eyes can kill too.

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Suzon Albert 31 March 2021

Don't look into her eyes you will get saved.

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Ricky Manhatten 31 March 2021

Ready to get killed....

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Zoyza Da Vinka 31 March 2021

Wonderful plot to get killed.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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