Senryu- A Love Relation Comments
silence between us
two inseparable lives
parallel in love
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This Senryu is great but somehow I think that the word - lines - on the second line should be given as 'lives' which would be more specific and to the point. What do you think? Regards to you and Happy New Year.
Both- hand in hand; Walking along the rail Parallel and safe!
Ishq bezuban hota hai. A beautiful poetic expression.
Love is blessed with the fourth dimension which carries it to the eternal end.
Wonderful poetic expression with a tinge of philosophical insight. Beautifully penned my friend.5 stars
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9/9/2025 3:17:00 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful, as usual....