Senryu - A Lighthouse Comments

This is a beautiful Senryu on soul and emotion having touching expression with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.10

A soul will be carried by the light. A great write.

Lighthouse. has been well done here, thanks for sharing

We should all strive to be such a lighthouse.

I will save it for further reading..

A complete scene and a complete story in 9 lines of 5-7-5 syllables, even limitation cannot stop creative thinking. Full 10