Tuesday, October 6, 2020

Senryu-A Journey Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Soran M. H 07 October 2020

If the island of relationships is based on true love, the people will enjoy the pleasure of intimate and sincere relationships. Love is the basis of human movement, and unlike hatred, well penned senryu. Excellent

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2020

...........through the sea of love....life boat....a meaningful Senryu is well executed. five stars.

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Rajnish Manga 07 October 2020

Excellent poem. One has to reach out to others to nurture new relationships or to renew the existing bonds. Love and care are the basic tools to get the desired results. Thanks, Asim ji. This is such a marvelous poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2020

You are very right. Sea of love is the best see to behold all rivers. Life's boat is well sailed in such rivers to sea. A nice poem is interestingly penned.

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Varsha M 06 October 2020

Very true word. A sequel that is always same.

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