Senryu - A Gift Comments

Excellent poem ife cycle- God's gift pollution- a human's gift rainbow- nature's gift

Pollution- a human's gift. What a gift! Good senryu!

Pollution- a uman's gift. What a gift! Good senryu!

How much do we value our gift depends on us.5*

Message very clear. Nicely written

Vah Asim sahab, the message is clear

life cycle- God's gift pollution- a human's gift rainbow- nature's gift

Life, pollution and rainbow all three fantastic.

Very well thought. Good Senryu.5*