Senryu - A Fight Comments

1. Lifeless acts 2. Struggle 3. Tough situations.

Life is amazing. Soul witnesses that every body produces shadow when it comes in contact with light. This poem is amazingly penned..5 stars.

Excellent one shadow without soul reality fighting dreams life seems in doldrums

shadow without soul No light, no respite, no goals life seems in pothole....... what do you say?

DJ salute to your imagination power. Brilliant! ! !

Melancholy song of life. Nicely written.5**

Melancholy song of life. Nicely written.

What a fight between reality and dreams and soul is missing thats great.

Body without soul i heard but shadow without soul is new to me, you area cracker poet. Brilliant in terms of innovation