Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Senryu - A Few More Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gold fish swim around
the glass fish tank peacefully
teasing greedy cats
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Sandra Martyres
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Ted M 11 August 2009

A bouquet of red roses for his special young lady instead of a ring ******** Do we see a Journalist here. On target as usual. Nice write.............

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 August 2009

Beautiful senryu, Sandra. An enjoyable read indeed. Best Wishes Naseer

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 July 2009

great indeed! penned beautifully! 10+

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These are all delightful and clever too Sandra. I thought the bouquet of roses a little sad, the fish very naughty teasing and the cloud seed extremely original. 10 Karin Anderson

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Carl Harris 30 July 2009

These are three very wonderful and beauifully expressed senryu poems, Sandra, each speaking on a different subject very well. Carl.

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lovely sandra...sad for the cat...less valuable roses...cloud seed...wonderful..never thought of it

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Carol Gall 30 July 2009

lovely sandra great senryu

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Beautiful, pleasant and humorous.10

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