Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Senryu - 91 Wait Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
fly
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Darren Jkoeryo 10 December 2015

In contract meaning but applicable to both in their own ways, Man

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Thoughts are elevated to fly in this interesting senryu and this is definitely very thoughtful poem shared here.10

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Kelly Kurt 09 December 2015

Nicely conceived and written senryu

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Rajnish Manga 09 December 2015

Spider and the poet both have been spinning their own webs and have got a common pursuit- fly which can have an extension of flight for the latter. This is an amazing articulation. Thanks, Md.Asim ji.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 December 2015

Short but sweet and meaningful senryu. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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