Senryu - 81 (A Burden To Carry) Comments

First line itself is fantastic and followed by second and finally a burden to carry..great thinking man.

If only we could actually leave behind our GREED - desire for things we don't really need for our survival - we would have been far better.. Thank you Asim. A fine Senryu..10 points from me...

Great senryu Asim! A basket of desires will weigh heavy on our shoulders!

very true some carry them to their grave thanks Asim

Nicely projected reality. Desires for material things is greed and greed is insatiable and ultimately leaves the person unhappy and disturbed.10 points.

You have an eye to the real! Wonderful Senryu, Mohammed. Things are burdens. And You know it