Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Senryu - 76 (Severity) Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Sanjukta Nag 12 November 2015

You stated an absolute truth, which is very a sad thing for human life.100+

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

and forgotten thanks Asim-10

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Seema Chowdhury 11 November 2015

A poignant and a meaningful write very well expressed in theses lines

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Unsaid and deeds left undone seem to be humorous in this wise sharing. Graves are too amazing in left words. Wise sharing....10

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Akhtar Jawad 11 November 2015

I think this grave is brain's unconscious part, apparently dead buy affects our thoughts when conscious is dormant and sometimes sends us in a land of sweet and nightmares.dreams. A nice poem.

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Kelly Kurt 11 November 2015

A very profound Senryu, Mohammed. Thanks

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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