Senryu - 73 (Evasive Dreams) Comments

realism of life disturbs with illusions, hence dreams are evasive.

Outstanding...Life is illusion then dreams are evasive.

dreams are evasive. dreams save us. nice!

I agree with you fully.... Life is illusive and dreams evasive! Great senryu!

An insightful and powerful Senryu. Thank you, Mohammed

Amazingly dream, s are evasive. Coming with illusion still we face reality around us. A thoughtful poem shared with wise mind.10

I recollect two lines from Nazish Pratabgarhi, Had darja bheanak hay tasveere jahan Nazish, Dekhe na agar insan kutch khab to mar jae. (Caricature of the world is horrifying-If one doesn't dream, he will die) It; s a beautiful poem by Asim......................10

yes, i do agree with you that dreams are evasive, well-composed poem, thanks for sharing.

I have often wonder why your senryu have the answer right great senryu my riend-10++

Dreams are so evasive and intrusive but reality of life is sprinkled with illusions too! Beautiful write!

Dreams are evasive is a fact. Only a few who could translate their dreams into reality by consistent toil are, thus, exception to the rule and hence, they prove it. Wonderful senryu. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.