Senryu - 61 (Life In Wrong Lane) Comments

Of course life will run in wrong lane, Master of Haiku and Senryu, Asim, God bless u.

Dream is much needed in life. Nice work.

Life running in wrong lane is painful. Having beauty of love is interesting done. Very well drafted....10

Yes, when hopes are shattered, life feels like this. Well written piece on life as usual.

Good, I am dumbfounded!

change lane! Change lane! Thanks Asim-10

Such a life will be miserable! I know it is fictional! Great Senryu Asim!