Senryu: 501 Comments
two ignited hearts
like a pearl inside the shell
year glint in the eyes
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I agree with Rajnishji's comment. That last line speaks volumes about your imaginative power.
Love can be expressed in so many ways but every time you do it, it leaves its mark. Thanks, Asim ji.
A wonderful senryu that beautifully depicts two hearts consumed by love. Well crafted with great imagery.
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7/25/2025 8:59:20 PM # 1.0.0
Superb haiku. I liked the theme.