Thursday, October 15, 2015

Senryu - 47 (Your Dreamy Eyes) Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

A comment is not enough to praise the beauty of your poem. Just going to hit the 10.

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* Sunprincess * 15 October 2015

......a dreamy poem so beautiful ★

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Kelly Kurt 15 October 2015

A lovely Senryu, Mohammed. I would change It to Them to keep eyes plural.

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Loke Kok Yee 15 October 2015

you must be deeply in love to write such a sweet dreamy haiku, takes me back to my young days! Thanks

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M. Asim Nehal

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