Senryu - 43 (Purity Lost) Comments

reality for me is I have to go to work today early

Dreams gets thumping at the hands of reality, well expressed.Liked it.10.

There is a sad undertone to this senryu; how reality alters the beauty and the purity of dreams...

Reality always devours dreams, still we like to savour dreams inside our eyes. this is life! thank you.

How to preserve a dream in this world?

Deeply and nicely envisioned. Wonderful dream. Thanks for sharing.