Monday, October 12, 2015

Senryu - 42 (Bridge) Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 22 November 2015

Clean and clear haiku, bond between nature and man.

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Charl Cilliers 13 November 2015

I like this. The Haiku trains one in the techniques o0f writing good poems, the way scales are practice for the musician!

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Mihaela Pirjol 01 November 2015

When I was a child my grandmother used an expression, which I could not realize what it means at that tender age, but I still recall it after all these years; she said: '' If mountain with mountain sometimes meet; how people not to? '' Well, your poem evokes those words in my mind. A great haiku!

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Chuy Amante 26 October 2015

sound of your voice dear makes me run for cover how many more years? Ha ha! I've been married too long? nice poem poet, very thoughtful and kind

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Bri Edwards 24 October 2015

that's a VERY strong echo! i like it. :) bri p.s. i think PH is messing around with me being able to send messages to some poets, including you [unless you blocked me! ? ]. here are my responses to two nice poem comments you recently sent to me. let's see if you get them this way: =================================== Date & Time: 10/18/2015 9: 11: 00 AM Poem: 43458916 - Shall I Compare Akhtar To A Ball Of String? ... [a Tribute To My Ph Friend, Akhtar Jawad; Short] Member: Mohammed Asim Nehal Comment: Awesome tribute to Janab. Akhtar...........Loved it.....nicely penned. - - - - - - - - - - - - - Asim, thanks. Akhtar deserves the tribute. bri :) ======================================= Date & Time: 10/18/2015 9: 09: 00 AM Poem: 43492289 - Best-Blood: Mine! .... [medical Miracles; Fantasy (If You Must Know) : Me; Humor; Short] Member: Mohammed Asim Nehal Comment: Ha ha ha...made me laugh a loud...Nice humorous poem, enjoyed the satire part in your poem..Loved it. I invite you to read my poems, Thanks. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - It was 100% the TRUTH and nothing but the truth, so help me PH! :) :) bri - - - - - if you would like to share a specific poem or two, please send to me. thanks. i've read some already, as i'm sure you know. bri :)

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Mj Lemon 14 October 2015

Humanity is sometimes seen as existing outside nature. This poem, this reminder, serves to restore that link...A bridge indeed. Great work.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Thanks much MJ Sir.

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Sanjukta Nag 14 October 2015

Amazing. Only a heart full of love can draw such a nice picture of nature.

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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2015

Thank u so much, Sanjukta.

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Ari Alsio 13 October 2015

I was tempted to be nobody ignorant the deep in jungle

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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2015

Wow nice one, Thanks much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2015

Marvellous haiku so nicely and aptly presented. Thanks for sharing......10

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T Rajan Evol 12 October 2015

Amusing..............10

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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2015

Thank u Mr. Rajan.......

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2015

A sweet poem showing affirmation of the discovery of a unifying thread going through nature in its various expressions. Poet at his philosophic best. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

Thank u so much....I appreciate your comments.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 October 2015

lovely haiku, enjoyed reading. Thanks

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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

You enjoyed I am happy, Thanks much.

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Rahman Henry 12 October 2015

wonderful Haiku. 'Echo of your voice binds the mountains together bridge of nature built' The complete and total imagary....10+++++

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