Senryu - 41 (Revival) Comments

Rejuvenated by your haiku.Nothing more to write.

Ah! It is invigorating to read this one after reading the previous one...there is still hope for our dreams! Lovely senruy!

You are the one who unknowingly inspired me to start writing Haiku. Each of your haiku is worth reading and learning. Thanks a lot. And I must say 10 is just a number, you deserve more.

I have been told that such content as this makes it a senryu and not a haiku (technically) In any case, very well written and inspirational

And your haiku rejuvenates me! Thanks

Riding on a fable from mythology, the poem gives us a great philosophical message as to how one should bounce back in the face of defeat and disappointment. I love it.