Friday, August 14, 2020

Senryu- 402 Life's Journey Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Juhaina Tumlu 18 August 2020

Wow so well, so well , Love it on the shore of life smoke of the caravan floats sun dips in ocean

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2020

Beautiful fascinating Senryu, Asim Sir! A 10++++++for the Senryu. I always enjoy your verses, poems, Haiku and Senryu!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2020

Coasts! ! Coats and boats; Life's journey. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 15 August 2020

Sun dips in ocean......profound piece......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 August 2020

Poetic observation of life.Beautiful!

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A meaningful senryu insightfully crafted. What floats in life journey is the smoky dust of the caravan....10

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M. Asim Nehal

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