Senryu 34 Comments

A meditational poem Thanks SavithaJi

Devotional poetry gives us immense joy. We can move ahead with greater joy, if we chant Lord's name. Hare Krishna..Hare Krishna.

It's beauty and peace that inspires a poet. A poet is a human and he is also affected by the current affairs. A nice poem.

Definitely dear poetess, while the worls around us is madly rushing poets in us take a pause

Poetry- my rapt Pause, while the world around me Moves in a mad rush. - - -A beautiful Haiku, loved it.

2 - " adjective: rapt 1. completely fascinated by what one is seeing or hearing. " Andrew looked at her, rapt" " The definitions for 'senryu' and 'rapt' fit the poem fine. Yes, let the world rush by while we (try to) find refuge, now and then, in poetry, like horses wearing blinders! ! :) bri

1 - " adjective: rapt " Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5,7,5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions." (cont.)

Poetry Original Infinity The analogy of the universe On the way to the whim

Great Haiku on poetry. Top score

Oh! I love a senryu in the hands of a true poet! ! ! I love the pause- -it works especially in context with the poem. And the image and message are spot on! Top marks!

Brilliant. Taking time for self is something one should do often.5 Stars Savitaji.