Senryu 33 (Freedom Of Soul) Comments
...
Read full text
Yes, that is the most effective way to set one's mind free of all disturbing thoughts! A great haiku!
Unless you put your heart and mind in your deeds peace will keep in abeyance. Excellent senryu
keep the mind Set free from other clutch leave the greed don't make remote control to be hypnotized or to do so!
bu what can one do who was like PPME born soul- free only sole ma'am abs OF SOUL FREE A SOLE
Inner freedom matters a lot and we should feel every positive breath in life. We should grow with standard and perception of positive breath. This poem is very nice and lovely. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work.
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/23/2025 6:00:17 AM # 1.0.0
An original thought brilliantly expressed in the form of a senryu. If we put our heart and mind to what we do, our soul is set free - what a wonderful perception of life and soul! The Senryu gets 10/10 from me.