Senryu.3. Blackhole Comments

In the sunlit plain Of all minds is a black hole Where scalded dreams lie.....all lines are co related and meaningful. A poem on dream is cutely insightfully delineated. Beautiful poem.

and everything disappers poetic

Brilliant and profound.Thank u.anjandev roy.

and burst and spread all round on a big bang, we see our dreams have changed their shapes, enough flexible to be fulfilled.

True. only you could write this way... I have plenty of black holes. No matter what you write,5 lines.3 liner,2 liner,1 liner or just two words, i'm sure to find lyrics in there.

Good Senryu! My epilogue: An ashen blackhole Filled with cinders and embers Which burn deep and hurt

Very true, Nicely written.....Liked it.

Exactly. Beautiful expression.

In dreams mind bloom like expression of black hole. Very fascinating expression of fantastic nature. Wise sharing really.10

great write on dreams not fulfilled thanks Valsa-10

Psychoanalytical thought about our dream-world expressed beautifully in the poem. Thanks.

We all have such an inner place