Senryu 3 - Amid Sea Waves, Amid Friends Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Senryu 3 - Amid Sea Waves, Amid Friends

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Amid worthless friends
Is to be without water
To drink at mid sea

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A friend in need is a friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 24 December 2019

Lovely Senryu, but then a worthless friend is an oxymoron in a way.

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It can be Pathakji because a friend should always be worthy. Thank you

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It sounds so Pathakji because a friend should always be worthy. Thank you very much

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Savita Tyagi 10 December 2019

Great Senryu full of wisdom.

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Thank you Savitaji. I have seen and heard of so called friends keeping away at the time of need

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 02 December 2019

hard realities of life meaningfully penned

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Thank you dear poet. We have to identify real friends

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 November 2019

Three brilliant lines imbued with insight. I concur with your powerful thoughts. So very true. Cleverly written.

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Thank you very much Rose Mary. I had several occasions to think over the depth of sincerity of friends

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2019

A prudent three liner sir! Appreciated the undertone.........................................10

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