Senryu 29 (Jaded Heart) Comments

Oh! U like what you have done with this! ! Every line charms the poet in your reader as well as touches us emotionally. Incredible last line. 10++++++++++++++++++

When mist and clouds mix each other we become confused to differentiate but beauty is excellently witnessed. When we feel that loneliness and solitude both are mixed then we feel greater hope of improvement as heart bells to perceive greater realm. An important poem is excellently penned...10