Senryu 27 Series (Victory) Comments

A series of well penned Senryu on victory you have fantastically shared here, who does not desire for victory? but for it need deeds, thanks for sharing,10

I would rather face My vices as enemy Than the world outside. ‘Cause beating myself Is in my hands but not a Beating of this world.......so touching and true. A great philosophical poem nicely executed.10

This sentiment especially in this time of constant incivility is so very true. We can shock those around us by failing to react. A humble nature these days speak loudly. To pull the world down in order to lift ourselves up is an illusion. We all go down as a result. I appreciate this writing for the message conveyed. Wonderful.....

thanks for poem and Poet's Notes! i especially enjoyed the first 3; 1 & 2 i liked best. to MyPoemList. Unlike Savita's vices, MY vices are SO BAD that i'd take my chances against the world instead! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ‘Cause Winning myself..i'd substitute ..Beating myself......[NOT beating myself up! ]...for...Winning myself. [syllable count stays the same] i'm not sure of the meaning of last senyru. oops! Senryu! bri :)

A profound truth! Only when there is an adversary, our bench marks will go up or else we will stay in a self complacent mood! Wisely put!

So much said and so much left to be perceived by self introspection, in so few words! 10/10.

A very incisive and thought provoking succinct write. Great brevity, Savita. 10++++

Yes Kelly you are right. I intended to write more Senryu to that effect but got busy. Only now I have been able to compose them so adding them in comment. I thank you for your comment. I would rather face My vices as enemy Than the world outside. ‘Cause Winning myself Is in my hands but not a winning of this world

The adversary can be yourself. A profound Senryu.

However, desire to win by a fashionable king or a tormented/tortured soldier remains to be comprehended! A very insightful piece of work!

A wonderful reflection! A beautiful Senryu dear madam....................................................10