Thursday, July 1, 2021

Senryu - 261 Comments

Rating: 5.0

on the mountain top
the innocent ants do climb
nothing to carry
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M. Asim Nehal
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 April 2022

How did I miss this one? Bravo!

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 July 2021

Awesome Haiku, nice and thoughtful.

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Gordon Walter 03 July 2021

Master stroke. Liked it.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 July 2021

Indeed, I have seen so many many mountaintops, and the ants constantly working, carrying, I was the only giant up there, a very thought-provoking Senryu, Mr.Asim Sir.5 Stars fullest on Top!

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Kostas Lagos 03 July 2021

Brilliant once again! ! !

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The Poem seems to me highly philosophic. To ants a small heap of soil is a big mountain. To certain people small benefits are big achievements.

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Varsha M 02 July 2021

Sir they are busiest being on Earth. They never tire. Nice image.

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Awesome poem, Terse and wise.

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Anjandev Roy 01 July 2021

This is brilliant work....

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Mamta S 01 July 2021

So is life's journey. Nice pic and haiku.

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Deepak S S 01 July 2021

Awesome, we are doing the same and finally have nothing when we go, A great philosophical poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

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