Thursday, December 8, 2016

Senryu - 248 Our Relationship. Comments

Rating: 4.8


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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 08 December 2016

I like the way you wrote this small poem, it can be interpreted in so many ways... a) Relationship between man and nature b) Man and God c) Two humans d) Two lovers e) Two Friends f) Two Soulmates and what not, MAN this is fantastic poem.10 for this one.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2016

Relationship of man and God nicely described in only three lines, a great poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

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