Senryu 24 Comments

To create a poetry it needs lobour, obsession, sincerity, dedication and carefulness along with imagination. A person who is on creating poetry becomes captive. Dear madam, you have nicely inscribed this theme in your poem. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

Indentured labor is dedicated to a sublime cause..The sweet internal pleasure of a servant to God is sweeter than anything, sweetest of all. The obsession is only to achieve perfection that speaks of sincerity, dedication and carefulness. A great Senryu with a marvelous underlying philosophy..Appreciate your write from the bottom of my heart..10