Senryu - 205 Life Comments

Painful sight has been so wisely depicted using the word massive, earthquake and debris. Excellent Senryu shared...10

The debris of life. Odd, isn't it how 4 words can contain such a massive amount of information and emotion. That is what I appreciate about senryu and haiku forms- -they demand brevity, paring the lines down to the essential but also poetically memorable words. Excellent piece.10+{+++++++++++++++

With the hardships of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.