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A beautiful observation, life is decreasing and one is happy on coming closer to death.
I sincerely appreciate the sharpness of your observation that turns an insignificant looking object into a literary marvel as is evident here in this poem. Thanks, Asim ji.
Thank u so much, I am humbled, your comments motivates me to explore further and farther....Thanks again Rajnishji.
Great observation. Fantastic imagery.