Senryu - 17 (Concave Love) Comments

Totally fallen in love.

Another lovely Senryu Dorothy Singing Still

i 'loved' the first two lines, though i generally do not aim toward love poems if i can help it! BUT the third line threw me. what does it mean, i wonder. i haven't come up with an answer. bri :)

That's an amazing poem.Beautiful imagery dear!

A concave lens may be a convex on on the other side, view depends on the combined focal length of two sides.

Wonderful imagery. A beautiful poem having deep speculation. Thanks for sharing.....10

A haiku with such a deep meaning .wonderful .thanks

An exclusive use of imagery.. i'm astounded.. and the last line made me speechless. this poem is beyond any rating.

Straight, as the crow flies ....Liked the simili Crashed into my heart.........Heart pierced with love arrow now replaced with another imagery...Heart with heart. I am in deep sea.........No where to go and no way to escape (No escape route) Wonderful haiku to read and analyse. Full marks Mr. Asim..

I appreciate this poem for its wonderful imagery and idiom. Feeling of love is overwhelming. Thanks for sharing.