Saturday, September 5, 2020

Senryu 17 -Caress Not Serpents Comments

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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Rob Lamberton 22 March 2024

Listen for a hiss before you kiss!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2024

A great succinct poem full of wisdom. Cleverly written.

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Varsha M 21 June 2021

Right guiding notion. Worthy lesson.

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2020

I like the Poet's Notes more than i do the poem. Good advice: take care of oneself! Lines 1 & 2 i'm unsure of, BUT i DO agree (generally) with line 3! ! ! This includes crocodiles. bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Servitude and attitude! ! ! With the muse of the truth; Uplifting righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 05 September 2020

Love needs distinction.Brilliant poem

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Thank you dear poet. Loving others and serving them is good. But we should be careful about the genuineness of the demanding ones

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