Senryu 17 -Caress Not Serpents Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Senryu 17 -Caress Not Serpents

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Loving is Godly
Save your life and serve charity
Caress not serpents

Saturday, September 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To love is Godly but without care of self it is dangerous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 05 September 2020

Love needs distinction.Brilliant poem

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Thank you dear poet. Loving others and serving them is good. But we should be careful about the genuineness of the demanding ones

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Rob Lamberton 22 March 2024

Listen for a hiss before you kiss!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2024

A great succinct poem full of wisdom. Cleverly written.

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Varsha M 21 June 2021

Right guiding notion. Worthy lesson.

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2020

I like the Poet's Notes more than i do the poem. Good advice: take care of oneself! Lines 1 & 2 i'm unsure of, BUT i DO agree (generally) with line 3! ! ! This includes crocodiles. bri :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Servitude and attitude! ! ! With the muse of the truth; Uplifting righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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