Senryu 16 - Need And Greed Comments

A great succinct write with a meaningful message. So true. Greed leads us to darkness and destruction.

Demanding more than is necessary has its own challenges. Beautiful poem

Just brilliant....

Nice insightful poetry. Well written. We need to remember this always.

Need of the rain! ! Better than greed! Reed of peace singing praises. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Yes excess of anything is bad, A nice senryu 10++++