Senryu 16 - Need And Greed Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Senryu 16 - Need And Greed

Rating: 5.0


Rain and sun we need
Too much will cause flood and drought
Get rid of our greed

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Greed causes dusasters
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 September 2020

Yes excess of anything is bad, A nice senryu 10++++

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Thank you very much. To hope for excess of anything is to undertake difficulties

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2024

A great succinct write with a meaningful message. So true. Greed leads us to darkness and destruction.

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Kingsley Egbukole 18 November 2023

Demanding more than is necessary has its own challenges. Beautiful poem

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2023

Just brilliant....

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Varsha M 21 June 2021

Nice insightful poetry. Well written. We need to remember this always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Need of the rain! ! Better than greed! Reed of peace singing praises. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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