Senryu # 16 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Senryu # 16

Rating: 4.4


spreads smoke burning scourge
Strike on breath of mosquito
Drive them for twelve hours

-April 02,2018 Chattogram (OF MOSQUITO COIL)

Monday, April 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: driving,insects
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2020

Smokes drive the insects away but pollute the air. The senryu is nicely painted.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2019

Smoke driving away mosquitoes! ! ! ! 🦟🦟🦟 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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