Senryu 15-Man Forgets God Reminds Comments
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Tombs! ! ! ! Death; Ancestors. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The old tombs lost care None is left to light candles. Tiny glow-flies take care - - - - Wow- -such a beautiful Haiku! I think a tiny glow-fly has in his power to light a tomb.We should not despair if someone big desert us.
Nature takes charge of the forgotten souls. Short and crisp lines 10++
Thank you very much dear poetess Aarzoo Mehek. Nature (God) has made everything complementary. We should be thankful
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7/28/2025 9:02:21 AM # 1.0.0
Wonderful and meaningful write with short but impactful words. Mother Nature's care is encompassing. A well crafted haiku.