Senryu 15-Man Forgets God Reminds Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Senryu 15-Man Forgets God Reminds

Rating: 5.0


The old tombs lost care
None is left to light candles.
Tiny glow-flies take care

Saturday, August 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: ancestors
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When old tombs are abanadoned tiny glow flies take dare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2024

Wonderful and meaningful write with short but impactful words. Mother Nature's care is encompassing. A well crafted haiku.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2020

Tombs! ! ! ! Death; Ancestors. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 24 October 2020

The old tombs lost care None is left to light candles. Tiny glow-flies take care - - - - Wow- -such a beautiful Haiku! I think a tiny glow-fly has in his power to light a tomb.We should not despair if someone big desert us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 August 2020

Nature takes charge of the forgotten souls. Short and crisp lines 10++

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Thank you very much dear poetess Aarzoo Mehek. Nature (God) has made everything complementary. We should be thankful

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