Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Senryu 14 (Inspired By Black Hole Pictures) Comments

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Savita Tyagi
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Akhtar Jawad 27 April 2020

Yes two eyes are the black holes in that the whole life may sink. A nice short poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 July 2019

Lovely expression. If eyes reflect your feelings, they also hide as much, the reflection is no total reveal, so are black holes, but nothing comes out of them. What about light eyes?

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