Senryu 14 (Blue Eyes) Comments

Some are waiting for Messiah, some for Krishna and some for Mehdi; they all may be right but there is rainbow inside us and it has seven beautiful colors, let us expand t to all those who are waiting for the Heavens to to replace the ugliness into beauty. A nice poem by Savita Ji.

two black eyes of yours mysterious black holes universe sinks there.........well constructed with lofty theme. Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful short work dear madam! I find a great poetic depth behind the screen of this beautiful poem.....10

Of late, we don't have the boon of watching a rainbow in the sky! May be because of climate change! However may the blue eyes set in the void have the fortune of beholding a rainbow! Beautiful Senryu!

Oh as usual as an old man I was confused. You see, I had forgotten about that poem on black hole. But after some fumbling got on to one. This one too is quite creative.