Senryu - 137 Light Comments

Good piece of poet-craft. Thanks sharing....

Very true Man, burden relieved, tears sherd.10

So very true...the soon we shed tears, our hearts feel immediately light. Again, another greatly written Senryu.

And, with love. Thanks for sharing.

Great antithesis. Great Senryu Tom Billsborough

Feeling very light with interesting leaden heart. Very amazing senryu is shared with broad vision. Nicely drafted.