Senryu 13 - Fire Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Senryu 13 - Fire

Rating: 5.0


Fire causes your birth
Fire constitutes your body that
Fire consumes at last

Monday, August 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 16 August 2020

Absolutely brilliant work.......thank u, dear poet..........anjandev roy.

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Thank you Anjandev. One among the Panchabhoota is fire, our desires are fire and to the fire itself we go in our last journey

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 August 2020

Again very aptly said and made Senryu...

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Thank you very much Pathakji. It's the fire within us that kindles our desires of the Panchabhuta and into the fire we go at last.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 August 2020

An insightful write on 'fire' like your another excellent work on air'.....pragmatic poetic expression sir.........................10

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Thank you very much dear Dr.Dillip. Air and Fire being consituents of our Panchabhoota are very decesive in our life unto the last breath

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 August 2020

So Fire is everything since birth to death! ! ! !

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Thank you very much dear Mahtab. Its a spark that causes our birth and it is the same spark that inspires and energises us to live and at last it is to thw fire that we led to.Its the truth.

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