Senryu - 121 Make Me Immortal Comments

Before death comes! Thanks for sharing.

Ah what a senryu and cover picture liked it

Immortal in words and in deed both so that the world will remember you like Layla-Majnoo, Pyramus and Thisbe, Romeo and Juliet

In a transcendent moment of pure love, immortality is present

a beautiful plea, straight from your heart. Sometimes few words speaks volumes.10+++++