Senryu - 118 A Life's Journey Comments

Outstanding poem on life. The images are simply superb.10 for sure.

This is a lovely mix of haikus and senryu, making a composite whole! A sure 10

life will never end life continues to thrill us no need to clock watch!

Candles set to dance! And, to respect a culture. Thanks for sharing.

Dreams are without a doubt part of life's journey

I like the last three lines..Between realism and dreams..simple yet simply superb...10+++++++++++

That's how life sums up for all of us... And you have beautifully portrayed the shift of time with your beautiful words.10++++